Once you have a first draft on paper, you can delete material that is unrelated to your thesis and add material necessary to illustrate your points and make your paper convincing.

一旦你有了论文的第一份草稿，你就可以删除与你的理论不相关的材料，并有必要增加阐释你的观点和让你的论文更有信服力的资料。